Thread:Dalrish/@comment-37993906-20190222080308/@comment-37993906-20190222101311

1. Example needed

2. It's a style, valid style invalid argument

3. Maybe it is a part of the plot

5. like what?, example needed and this should be "4" not "5"

5. Maybe give them suggestions on how to make them better

6. I think it's not needed when characters are talking if they talk that way

7. Each pages is a skit

8. Example needed

9. It is a good introduction, nothing wrong