Thread:Dalrish/@comment-37993906-20190222080308/@comment-38390171-20190222100909

1. run on sentences

2. script writing in a book

3. always the fourth wall

5. playing pity points in the book just to get more reads

5. your characters are so boring it's hard to even read it

6. no grammar

7. there is no story

8. plot holes

9. the description